Swimming

Learning Intention:

• We are learning to use the features of explanation writing to inform and persuade our audience.   

                 Swimming
Why is swimming so important to us people?
Swimming is so important.  There are many people who do not  know how to swim and because of this they are at risk of  drowning . Both children and adults need to learn how to swim before they get into deep water. If you are not a confident swimmer, you should not  swim in the deep sea because you are only putting your life at risk.

Swimming  helps us to develop  skills in the water that can save our lives.Learning to swim is not only for people who know the way of swimming, but it is for everyone old and young, and includes not only swimmers but also people on boats. People on boats need to learn how to swim in case of danger like, falling off their boats.  If this happens they need to know how to swim to survive.

Parents should make sure that their children learn to swim and adults need to learn as well so that if they need to they will be able to save their own lives and perhaps the life of another.